SHF Artist '10
Post by alx on Aug 20, 2010 11:18:12 GMT
Since this work is Silent Hill themed (in an exceedingly liberal sense) I thought that I might give y'all a crack at it before I submit it for a contest. Of course, my deadline is this Saturday 8.21.10 so it isn't like you have a whole lot of bandwidth to reply, nor that I will have much opportunity to move on your suggestions
My main concern is that the piece seems to static... I wanted the zombie to be lunging out of the darkness at her next meal and to this end I kept the level of detail down on most of the figure and altered the background to help her pop forward. Of course the blood really slows down the read but as that is an essential part of the piece, it can't be helped
I can fade the domo-kun graphic if it is too prominent. Additionally, I am considering picking up some highlights on the sleeve in the lower right corner but am worried that this would slow the piece down to no worthy end. Are there any other problem areas?
My main concern is that the piece seems to static... I wanted the zombie to be lunging out of the darkness at her next meal and to this end I kept the level of detail down on most of the figure and altered the background to help her pop forward. Of course the blood really slows down the read but as that is an essential part of the piece, it can't be helped
I can fade the domo-kun graphic if it is too prominent. Additionally, I am considering picking up some highlights on the sleeve in the lower right corner but am worried that this would slow the piece down to no worthy end. Are there any other problem areas?
