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Post by Vio on Jul 22, 2009 17:48:39 GMT
Now what could have possessed Sethos into finishing Nadra´s sentences? That´s coming up in the next page. ;D No! You wouldn't...
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Post by sunset on Jul 22, 2009 18:06:15 GMT
I did. ;D
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Post by alx on Jul 23, 2009 0:54:49 GMT
Narkisa is trying on new clothes?
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Post by sunset on Jul 23, 2009 1:11:58 GMT
LOL Yeah, new clothes, new bodies.... ;D
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Post by Kiryū Kazuma on Jul 23, 2009 21:34:46 GMT
Need to take time to read through this is all but god you have an ubberly great talent there
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Post by sunset on Jul 24, 2009 2:57:46 GMT
Thank you, Kumiko, and welcome to my Lady of the Horde thread. I´m glad you liked the pages.
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Post by alx on Jul 25, 2009 21:13:37 GMT
Kiryū Kazuma: Come for the art, stay for the smack talking! alx: Come on babe, you've been in that changing room all day... Narkisa: Just a few more minutes alx: We're going to miss our reservation! Narkisa: But I want to try on the whole covenant (she steps out of the changing room dressed as Sethos) Narkisa: How do I look? alx: Divine...
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Post by Vio on Jul 31, 2009 19:01:47 GMT
ACK!
"Vio faints from a build-up of suspense'
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Post by sunset on Aug 5, 2009 1:08:31 GMT
LOL Thanks for that, Alx, that was hillarios. Man, I´m gonna miss these asides and dialogues once the story´s wrapped. Hey, Vio, sorry for leaving you hanging, I don´t even know what to say anymore with these constant failures to upload regularly. Anyone up for a climax? How about those Kirby dots in the first pannel? Suddenly, I´m feeling really sorry for Sethos... - Fly, girl, fly!
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Post by Vio on Aug 5, 2009 2:06:40 GMT
So Sethos, is just an echo?
NOOO!!!
Vio hissy fit in 5, 4, 3...
Bowdicca picks up Vio and flies into the air.
Nadra: Break the Sky!!!
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Post by sunset on Aug 5, 2009 2:50:50 GMT
LOL Sorry, Vio. I think you´re not gonna like next page very much, this is the part where Sethos goes down. ;D
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Post by SilentHero on Aug 5, 2009 7:32:03 GMT
Great twist, sunset! Was that planned from the beginning or just something you thought up as you went along? If the latter, when did you think of it? I also love the idea of Narkissa somehow launching a nuclear missle to start an atomic holocaust when she realized that Nadra was not going to allow her to destroy the planet. Ingenious. Just gushing with love for this drawing conclusion and I can't wait to see Sethos get his, (sorry Vio). One thing though, did Nadra's Sethos echo kill Aeron's daughter? If so, how will he take the knowledge that his daughter's loss was due to in a large part to Nadra? And I also wonder how Nadra would feel if that was true.
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Post by sunset on Aug 5, 2009 12:43:54 GMT
Hey, Silent Hero, thanks! I´ve come up with this twist about a couple months ago. I´ve been making the story up as I go but now that we´re in the final stretch (there´s only two more "revelations" to go) , it´s mostly a matter of picking the open threads and shuffling them to see what combinations I can bake. ;D The Devourer - it doesn´t seem fair to keep calling her "Narkissa" since that was her previous host body- was meant to doublecross Nadra from the beginning, the problem was "how" since I´ve been working on the basis that deep down inside, she really is Nadra´s friend and you don´t usually hurt your friends . Even as they were fighting, it was not much different from two best friends quarreling. Took me a while to figure it out but it finally hit me:" we hurt the ones we love". About "Narkissa" launching a nuke, that´s a bit beyond her power. She´s been caged for the last 10 years and Nadra has been looking over her shoulder ever since she was busted out. Still, she´s been around for millions of years and you learn a few tricks in that time (like playing with the hearts of men. And women ). I´m still torn about Sethos. Oh, he will be getting his alright, it´s just that I really don´t wanna kill the guy, seems like a waste... Little reptile really grew on me About Sethos killing Aeron´s daughter, that happened at least a century ago (you´ll notice that in the flashback, they were wearing victorian clothing), long before Nadra walked into his front porch, so she´s cleared from at least that one...
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Post by Vio on Aug 7, 2009 17:55:59 GMT
"Vio chews his fingernails, then his fingers..."
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Post by alx on Aug 8, 2009 0:48:17 GMT
Dunno if that line was intentional but it reminds me of a famous boast of Chinese swordsmen
"With one cut, I will shatter heaven..."
Thanks for that, Alx, that was hillarios. Man, I´m gonna miss these asides and dialogues once the story´s wrapped.
No worries, I bet Vio will do the sequel for you if you let him. And if you don't mind it being told in emoticons
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